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Nihilian Effect :: Entirety - Part One


In a time long past, there was a world broken and torn. It lay within the vast emptyness of space, but was not empty in itself. This world held a people of great power and great responsibility, a people of creation and rebirth; these people were the Endorasu.

Each held a power of immense proportions, through which they lived by creating life and creatures of their own likeness that they spread across dead or dying worlds, upon whos death were returned to the creator. Thus they lived by recycling their energy in this manner.

But on the other side of their broken planet lay a desolate hold, a fortress to hold those of death and decay. On the dark side of this world were the Devourers. Unlike their creative cousins, these beings lived to feed, each upon a different sort of energy, each to his own liking, and each in his own manner. It began slowly, appearing one by one, born to kill, until a crisis was realized and they that devoured were emprisoned in that fortess until they themselves died.

But it would not last forever. A man who went by the name of Deimos, an Endorasu of fear, whos domains and worlds were filled with naught but terror and nightmares, came by hapstance apon a boy in his youth who devoured unlike any other, but could not devour him, though the reason as to why not was never discovered. Shortly after they had met, the eater was found and captured after giving much trouble and causing many deaths. And this man named Deimos, in his youth, proclaimed the unfairness in the matter, though none would listen, so he vowed to undo the wrong bestowed upon those who ate, who drank the worlds of their life to live. Thus, nearly 4000 years ago, this man of fear freed the Devourers and the world of the Endorasu died, those who could fled far and wide, through time and space to distant worlds to be yet discovered.

Among those who fled were 4 acquaintances, for when one flees they tend to take hold to those who happen to be close at the time. They fled together and came upon a small procreant planet of which they decided to claim. These 4 were the great and most influencial creator of their time, Lianandra of Eternal, the warlord and energy wielder, Algemeth of Destruction, his sister the soul maker and progressor of plains, Selena of Spirit, and finally a Endorasu who could not create, whos domains were empty and void, Oblidarius of Nothingness. And so they settled, vastly spreading their creations across this world upon which they had come.

Lianandra, being the most magnificent creator that she was, conceived most abundantly, allowing the other two to add touches to some as well as create their own, though not with much love in her words. But as for Oblidarius, viewed as a failure by she was he, since launching life was not in his list of commands. Though after a time Selena began having fair feelings towards the maker of nothing, as he did for her, and as such she offered to assist him in the molding of naught. So nothing became something, and it was deemed Dervanni with the looks of its lord about it.

When the greater creator found out about the deed, her anger peaked, and heirecy was claimed upon the act. Algemeth sided with his sister's love, and being the weilder of war that he was, declaired it against her, and it included the whole of the world and all their inceptions. But the new creator was outnumbered even with the support he received from his and their opus of sentience, for Lianandra had raised to her level the opressed and the lonely, giving them lay to the leads of nature.

In the end, mother of many was proclaimed the victor as she imprisoned her companions and cursed their accomplices, which also included some of her own who did not agree with her. The Dervanni were proclaimed evil and after a time the truth of the matter was lost and rewritten to amplify the appearance of the now pure and righteous goddess. Thus time went on, with Lianandra ruling this new world, and naught to test her, she estabolished her throne and was slowly forgotten as all gods are.

TBC...
This is the first part of the entire overview story behind Nihilian Effect.

Part 2 -> [link]

Each Part is an overview of one of the stories in Nihilian Effect
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Anmaril Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah, I understand what you mean, I've started a similliar prologue, but not with the same plot, it's different in the kind of creation of the worlds, and I've added some things about the creation of the gods itself, and all the stuff where they made of.
But great, keep it up ;)
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kalez Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009  Professional Writer
well i didnt want to get into the creation of the gods, as i want there to be some mystery lol, but the 3rd story does deal with material that was used to create all universes.
cant wait to read yours sometime!
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Anmaril Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
you can read it when I had plublished it sometimes ;)
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kalez Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009  Professional Writer
yay! :D
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Dokitaro Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
Great stuff, as to be expected from you. Nice foundations, I really can't wait to see how this one pans out.

The concluding line 'forgotten as all gods are' is cold and works well. I'm guessing at one point in the future story her existence will have some sort of importance? That's the feeling I get.
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kalez Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008  Professional Writer
well she gets forgotten, and... its a bit complicated, because when the hero from the "first" game emerges as being of the dark race she comes out of hiding, but doesnt reveal her bad side til they discover the truth about what she did. she actually sides with them for a while, screwing them over from behind the scenes. its alot more complicated than that, i dont really know how to explain it lol
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Dokitaro Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2008
Ahh, I think I understand.
What software are you using to make the game? What platform is it for?
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kalez Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2008  Professional Writer
well were using several peices of power programs, such as 3dsmax and photoshop, but alot of work right now is purely hardcopy and design, lacking moneys. but plan to make it for the latest powerful platforms that will be out at the time, if its released soon then proly the ps3 and xbox360, screw the wii...
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Dokitaro Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008
Aww, poor Wii x3 That's the only one I have.. *totally not a gamer* I followed this chart: [link] :D
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kalez Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008  Professional Writer
wait so where do i fit then... i like videogames have real friends and internet friends... WHAT SYSTEM SHOULD I OWN! :confused:

lol im a gaming freak but dont play them on a pc that often, i love consols, and the ps3 is the most powerful consol/HDDVD player/dvd player/cd player/blueray player/computer system/etc combination created so far, with the xbox360 being a close competitor with its insane community system, so thats why i chose those two.
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Dokitaro Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008
Both 8D

I like pc best, and handheld things. It's just about what you look for in a game. Since I never feel like/are able to play for longer than 20 minutes, handheld are ideal. Pc I like since you can customise a LOT. But I wouldn't really know these things ^^;
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kalez Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2008  Professional Writer
i prefer the large screens that you can get from consols, but thats proly cause im a guy lol. i used to play my handheld for hours on end... end up never leaving the bathroom lol. and i guess i like pc too, but im better with a controller, unless the game allows FULL keyboard/mouse customization, like FFXI did, that was awesome. though often ill just hookup my controller to the pc lol.
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ChuCK-AmuCK Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008
well written, great foundation for the long road to come!
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kalez Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008  Professional Writer
thank you very much!
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magicpotion Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very well written piece and a very good start to the story.
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kalez Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks! its actually a whole story, as in each part is just an overview for each of my stories, from one to the next, which are all in muh head, only partially written...
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GoingOffTheDeepEnd Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008
Very impressive, especially for only the first part. It kind of (but only kind of) reminds me of Ender's Game (by Orson Scott Card) meets space-vampires. Anyways, great concept and writing!
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kalez Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks! i never read that, though my dad keeps suggesting it.
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GoingOffTheDeepEnd Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008
You should read it, it's amazing, and the following three in the Saga are incredible as well.
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Dokitaro Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008
Oh wow, so dramatic.. I love the different personalities, and Oblidarius sounds like such a cool character.

Are you writing this in more detail? I'd love to hear more about their lives.

I love the different (would you use the word 'species'?) So much better than just human, dwarf and elf >0>
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kalez Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008  Professional Writer
i currently have about 24 species for it, and yes im writting it in more detail, the Entirety is just that: the entire background, but this is just the first part before the first game. you can read the beginning of the first game here -> [link]

if you want to more just let me know :D
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Dokitaro Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008
Ahh, makes sense =D
I'll make sure to read, it sounds so good from the Entirety.
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kalez Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008  Professional Writer
ty :hug:
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ikklesammy Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008
thats very creative I like the style of writing I coul imagine some booming voice telling this story as if it were centuries old
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kalez Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008  Professional Writer
haha, cool, thanks! never thought of it that way! though i did try reading it with a british accent, and that sounded pretty freakin cool lol.
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Error732 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008
Ooh, I like the epic feel to this. Sci-fi on a massive scale has a great power to it.

Overall, I enjoyed this. Despite a few spelling mistakes (emprisoned, heirecy), you've got a demanding prologue, here. I want to know the specifics of how these Endorasu operate; I want to know what they look like or where their world is. I want this to be followed with a story of some fully mortal race (humans, even) millenia later, rediscovering the lost creation of the universe.

Nice work!
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kalez Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008  Professional Writer
ho ho! if only you knew! lol. ther are 5 stories in the main saga, and 3 (i think) on the side, that tie into a massive collage spanning universes. its not really supposed to be sci-fi, more magic/fantasy, just happens to be some "outer-space" happenings lol.

ill note you on your questions :D
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Error732 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008
Oh, my. Sounds sprawling.

Much as I hate to admit it, being a sci-fi fan myself, the line between sci-fi and fantasy is fuzzy. As John Gunther Jr. once said, science fiction is no science and bad fiction.
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kalez Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008  Professional Writer
very good point. i personally think of robots everywhere, time machines, or the like when the term "sci-fi" is brought forth. a common misconception i'd assume
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livinzlife Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008
yes, the names are great! Nice job
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:iconkalez:
kalez Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks!
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chelano Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
sounds very nice. very cool indeed
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:iconkalez:
kalez Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks!
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chelano Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
your welcome :D
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GrahamLeese Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2008
Some good names in this!
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kalez Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks! my wife helped me think of em lol
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JoLuffiroSauce Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
nicely done!
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kalez Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks alot! XD
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