| Finally finished my first chapter. The whole lot is in my head, but as far as i know, there aren't any devices to extract thoughts from the brain yet, so i must take the long road. it drops near the end to a less descriptive storyboard like form for quicker writing, since it really only needs to be a script for the games. |












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In your story I like the kind how you describe a scene, but I see your artworks of the swords (they are great itself
Furthermore I read the name of your characters, and they are too modern for my taste and sounds japanese.
That are points, which only are important in my case, and things I want to avoid in my own story. Important for me, Is a realistic world, with much fantasy elements, old and new, off course. In that case the Wheel of Time is too political for me, and the Lord of the Ring have to much elements of the nordic mythology. Both are great books, but I've want to create a new thing.
Your kind of story isn't bad, please don't think that I want to say that
But thanks for the comments, they pleased me.
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i understand what your saying, though. my story has alot of elements from other thing (like you said jap sounding names and such) because when i first came up with it, i was much younger and it was based on things i liked back then as a child. as i made it better, refined and changed things to make it what it is, those small aspects, like the names and the swords, stayed the same, partly because its also part of the lore. but if i think about it, the main characters are mostly the only ones that are like that. the further you dive into the story, you will see differences.
that might have to be something else i add to th list of changes
if your interested, check out [link] to see how it is different.
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I like fantasy, but not that kind of it, more the traditionally way
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Have Fun and don't give up.
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Too late for solutions to solve in the setting sun, so run my baby run my baby run...
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*RUNS AND HIDES*
thanks for the comment
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